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My band's first recording...
But be warned...I enlisted my friend Andy to do the vocals and they are fucking awful. He sounds relaly really bad. But I hope you guys can look past the vocals and tell me how the music sounds...I played all the guitars and yes I know the solos are a little sloppy I did it in one take and this is just a rough draft of the song. But anyway here it is and I hope you can see through the veil of shittiness and appreciate it as a pretty cool metal song.
http://download.yousendit.com/33917B32406F79D7 Oh yeah it's called Victory.
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![]() I like it ![]() EDIT: You guys are pretty good, nice job ! EDIT EDIT: Except for those vocals
Last edited by Div; 11-03-2006 at 02:27 PM. |
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I'm not even gonna listen to this version, the instrumental one you sent me will do
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can you post the lyrics?
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great guitar . . . drums are average, and yes the vocals are awful. the lyrics are a little ridiculous . . . pretty much every power metal stereotype possible.
but thats just constructive critisism . . . really it is a great song, and the production sounds really good woa . . . got to the solo . . . pretty damn sick . . . sounds very professional
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Thanks guys! I wrote the half the lyrics and Andy the singer wrote the other half. I'll admit the lyrics are my weakest point in the songwriting, but hell I gave it my best. I'll post 'em tommorow because to be honest, I don't even know what Andy's saying in some of it.
![]() Oh and my band is called ' BEDLAM. '
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>: 4 8 15 16 23 42 Last edited by Spiral_Slave; 11-03-2006 at 08:53 PM. |
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I like it. Is there bass on here? I'm not sure if I can't hear it or if it's not there
![]() The vocals aren't all that bad. The vocal melody is good at least
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Not bad. The guitar was good, drums were tight.
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