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Old 01-01-2013, 04:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Datjazzfusion View Post
As I stated earlier, does anyone have any suggestions on my writing?
Keep it short and simple. You'll keep peoples interest that way. Your first review there was pretty much the perfect length.
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