Hmm...interesting. It's not all that bad, but I feel as if it could...let's say...fuller. It might just be because I'm a bit more interested to hear it without a female singer, because I feel it could benefit from a Dickinson-esque singer. But that's just me, of course. Which one are you?
"I will forsake you
Destroy and unmake you
With all my might, I will take you down"